I would like to express to you the joys of eating a scrumptious, steamy chicken biscuit. Until that moment, I had not experienced such invigorating pleasures as that of the tenderly soft flesh, fried to perfection and sandwiched between two butter-laced pillows. To this day, I can still recall the exact second that my lips closed upon that little piece of heaven that could only be a gift from God himself. It was love at first bite.
Genres:
- poem/song... to bring emotion to something that is not very emotional
- obituary... to be used after I eat the biscuit
- dialogue... to show the friendship between myself and the biscuit
- recipe... used to show the contents of my friend, the biscuit
- letter... to express my love for the chicken biscuit
11 comments:
wow, this was very interesting! I found this informational and comical at the same time!
that was quite an introduction! i really liked it and now i really want a chicken biscut!!!! the introduction was filled with detail and showed me a lot about the chicken biscut i liked it!
wow..two butter laced pillows
-sweet-
haha sounds great
<3 Lucy Carlyle
good job spellman, good introduction, now i want to eat
That is a really emotional intro... Especially about something so funny, haha... This is going to be the best!!!
wow~! really nice job!! i can't wait your next genre
I think this is very well. It has a lot of intresting things. i like the good details. your into is very intresting i think you might need a little more things and it will be excellent.
i want a chicken biscuit now. thanks a lot.
this is absolutely amazing. i am blown away. i'm sure the rest is going to be just as amazing, and i can't wait to read it!
Hugh Jass!
Wow, i have to tell you that this is truly the most original and entertaining piece i've yet to read. I love how i can see the comical side of you, what a sense of humor you have. I think the obituary will be great, it sounds hilarious. The details were excellent as well, very discriptive. So humorous and descriptive! Keep up the excellent work!
hahaha this was hilarious! i loved everything about it. The recipe, the poem, the apology letter, and the obituary was geniuos. This is a great topic to write about. We all can relate to your first experience with a chicken bisquet. You never once lost my attention, or gave the reader anything except for laughs from the beginning. I loved the obituary, and how the funeral was going to be held at a trash can. This story was soo funny! im really excited to see your next paper!!
love,
Blair Waldorf (Trixie)
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